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	<title>Comments on: On Rewriting</title>
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	<description>falling indelibly into the past</description>
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		<title>By: chuck</title>
		<link>http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/on-rewriting/#comment-2179</link>
		<dc:creator>chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Aug 2003 17:02:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I actually found myself hesitating often when I wrote on this subject.&#160; I&#8217;d pause, rephrase, stumble over my words.&#160; When I made my own comments about this issue on my blog, I don&#8217;t think I intended my statements to sound prescriptive, but simply meant to describe my writing habits.&#160; Funny how writing about my writing habits made for such a difficult, poorly phrased post.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually found myself hesitating often when I wrote on this subject.&nbsp; I&#8217;d pause, rephrase, stumble over my words.&nbsp; When I made my own comments about this issue on my blog, I don&#8217;t think I intended my statements to sound prescriptive, but simply meant to describe my writing habits.&nbsp; Funny how writing about my writing habits made for such a difficult, poorly phrased post.</p>
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		<title>By: Rory</title>
		<link>http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/on-rewriting/#comment-2178</link>
		<dc:creator>Rory</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Aug 2003 15:46:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;There&#8217;s surely some irony in the fact that I&#8217;ve been thinking how best to comment on this post for a few days, but haven&#8217;t quite come up with something I want to commit to the page&#8230;
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There&#8217;s surely some irony in the fact that I&#8217;ve been thinking how best to comment on this post for a few days, but haven&#8217;t quite come up with something I want to commit to the page&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Chloe</title>
		<link>http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/on-rewriting/#comment-2177</link>
		<dc:creator>Chloe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 08 Aug 2003 16:22:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I think this problem people have with rewrites is that they post on whims.&#160; When you&#8217;re writing a book, a paper for school, etc., you do the rewrites before publishing.&#160; I think that&#8217;s the issue people have.
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About Google Cache.&#160; There is a way to stop that.&#160; All my web pages are blocked from google cache.&#160; META NAME="GOOGLEBOT" CONTENT="NOARCHIVE"
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think this problem people have with rewrites is that they post on whims.&nbsp; When you&#8217;re writing a book, a paper for school, etc., you do the rewrites before publishing.&nbsp; I think that&#8217;s the issue people have.<br />
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About Google Cache.&nbsp; There is a way to stop that.&nbsp; All my web pages are blocked from google cache.&nbsp; META NAME=&#8221;GOOGLEBOT&#8221; CONTENT=&#8221;NOARCHIVE&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Jeremy Osner</title>
		<link>http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/on-rewriting/#comment-2176</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeremy Osner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2003 20:35:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I&#8217;m a great believer in revising entries, after I post I will read it back a few times and if something does not seem adequately clear or if I think it could be better phrased, I&#8217;ll wade in and change it no doubt. If over the next day or two I think of something that should be added or changed, or a correspondant suggests a change or addition, I will do it; whether I need to note the change, and how to do so, I decide according mostly to whimsy&#8212;I can just &lt;i&gt;tell&lt;/i&gt; whether the change is &#8220;part of the original intent of the post&#8221; or not.&#8212;Well actually if the change is suggested by somebody else I will just about always note it, in order to provide attribution. I am skeptical of any ethical argument in this regard&#8212;the site is a record of my own (or your own, or whose ever the site belongs to) musings and if a modification is going to help me/you/whomever make sense of them then by all means do it! Artificially conscribing the actions you can take with regards to your journal is counterproductive, so say I.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a great believer in revising entries, after I post I will read it back a few times and if something does not seem adequately clear or if I think it could be better phrased, I&#8217;ll wade in and change it no doubt. If over the next day or two I think of something that should be added or changed, or a correspondant suggests a change or addition, I will do it; whether I need to note the change, and how to do so, I decide according mostly to whimsy&#8212;I can just <i>tell</i> whether the change is &#8220;part of the original intent of the post&#8221; or not.&#8212;Well actually if the change is suggested by somebody else I will just about always note it, in order to provide attribution. I am skeptical of any ethical argument in this regard&#8212;the site is a record of my own (or your own, or whose ever the site belongs to) musings and if a modification is going to help me/you/whomever make sense of them then by all means do it! Artificially conscribing the actions you can take with regards to your journal is counterproductive, so say I.</p>
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		<title>By: chuck</title>
		<link>http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/on-rewriting/#comment-2175</link>
		<dc:creator>chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2003 20:13:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I&#8217;m really torn about these issues.&#160; Like you, I think I&#8217;m pretty cautious about seeing my words appear in the public sphere (another issue I may want to introduce to my students...).&#160; The blog has actually been helpful in that regard--I&#8217;ve become more comfortable with my potential audiences.
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I&#8217;m still struggling with the role of blogs in my classroom.&#160; Like you, I think revision is important, that no piece of writing is ever finished (maybe I&#8217;ll use the Oates piece as well).&#160; I think I want students to use blogs as places to conduct thought experiments, not where their &#8220;final&#8221; writing will necessarily take place, but because blogs are relatively public (especially via search engines), that creates a major complication.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m really torn about these issues.&nbsp; Like you, I think I&#8217;m pretty cautious about seeing my words appear in the public sphere (another issue I may want to introduce to my students&#8230;).&nbsp; The blog has actually been helpful in that regard&#8211;I&#8217;ve become more comfortable with my potential audiences.
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I&#8217;m still struggling with the role of blogs in my classroom.&nbsp; Like you, I think revision is important, that no piece of writing is ever finished (maybe I&#8217;ll use the Oates piece as well).&nbsp; I think I want students to use blogs as places to conduct thought experiments, not where their &#8220;final&#8221; writing will necessarily take place, but because blogs are relatively public (especially via search engines), that creates a major complication.</p>
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