Comments on: How It Turned Out http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/how-it-turned-out/ falling indelibly into the past Sat, 05 Jul 2008 04:55:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: steve http://www.plannedobsolescence.net/how-it-turned-out/#comment-1732 steve Wed, 28 Jan 2004 13:20:29 +0000 http://www.new.plannedobsolescence.net/?p=764#comment-1732 <p>Nice writing here Kathleen - you’re getting the bareboned emotion into language that is familiar but through a narrative that is anything but.  That can be challenging.  It puts me in mind of one of my mentors - P.H. of the writing program at that school back East with which we’re familiar - it’s the type of writing he would certainly be interested in and would encourage.  And I feel the same way about it - it makes me want to have more.  </p> <p> Keep at it - it’s captivating. </p> Nice writing here Kathleen - you’re getting the bareboned emotion into language that is familiar but through a narrative that is anything but.  That can be challenging.  It puts me in mind of one of my mentors - P.H. of the writing program at that school back East with which we’re familiar - it’s the type of writing he would certainly be interested in and would encourage.  And I feel the same way about it - it makes me want to have more. 

Keep at it - it’s captivating.

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